Another Day

[Pharmacist J]

I'm not exactly sure whether you'd call this a poem, a rap or a story that just rhymes. Whatever the case my be, I presume that this is my most story-like creation. I wrote this yesterday, Thursday, June 12th, 2008. Feedback is welcomed, PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK!

Another Day
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Another day, a new start

I pop a pill to start my day off

Do these really make me smart?

Take too many at once, and i cough

Lovely feeeling, and doze off

An hour later, the Morphine is fading

I set here debating

Whether or not i should pop a 30 M G

Yes! That's it! That's my key

To numbness, and no feeling

Meet up with some friends at the peak of my high

At this time, i'm low on my supply

Ask a friend, hey, wanna sell me some pills?

While he answers, his words blurred, I feel as if i'm floating on black-brazil hills

My body feels weightless, pain numb, yes, these pills do fullfill

I return home, noone about

Pop another pill, lay on my bed and zone out

Pain found it's home again

Deep within, i feel i must relieve oneself

Why do I punish myself?

I know that's fucked up to say

How many times have I visited this place?

How many happy pills must I take?

I wish I could rip off my face

Still being alive is my biggest mistake

The happy pills are getting me high

My chest is so tight

I think I'm going to die

To my head is a phone, 'Someone help me, Please! '

I'm leaving this life, theres things undone

I fall down to my knees

To my head is my hand with a gun.

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? Pharmacist J

Please leave comments.

[Jeremy]

Wow Pharmacist J, you continue to amaze me by your poems. Great job!

[Ry60003333]

Yea your poems are really good at showing real life situations, and they just feel so real!  :D

[maddy]

hotqueen11-sorry im not on my username but that was great.........i hardly doubt i could write soemthign so good.

[0ownage0]

that is a very good poem,and i agree with ry. I also hear that sometimes there are poem contests and one of my friends won 2nd place and got 500 dollars i think you should try to enter a contest because i think you would win. :)

[nestle]

can you right some love peoms please im tring to get a realy nice and pretty girl to love me

[I pooN I]

So.. What your saying Nestle, is that you want him to create the poem, then you steal it and take credit for it?

[Ry60003333]

So.. What your saying Nestle, is that you want him to create the poem, then you steal it and take credit for it?

I think thats the basic overview, but with a more "I didn't think of it that way" approach. ;)

[I pooN I]

Lol ok, that slightly clears it up.

[Chaoslancex]

wow your really talented and its preaty neat, am not really a good poem maker  :D

keep up the good work  ;)

Chaos.