Oh my god lol, I was looking through my poetry notebook and I found an untitled one from November! xD So I thought I'd post it. Funny thing is, I completely forgot about it. xD
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This boundless rage,
Fills many a page,
And I dare not to hide it.
Those countless days,
Not fraught with pain,
Were solemn and undivided.
Matters that are now sordid,
Matters that I once did not forbid,
Leaves woe at the discovery of this new foe.
These new days,
Leave my mind ablaze,
With thoughts uninvited.
It's time to give up,
The gig's up,
And I dare not to hide it.
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I think this was the predecessor to November the Second, to be honest. I dunno. But it was in my poetry notebook. xD
Nice poem, I'll try and think of a name for it or is uit called "Untitled"?
He did his thang again ::)
Nice poem travis :)
Quote from: caponer on March 11, 2010, 03:04:35 AM
He did his thang again ::)
Nice poem travis :)
He always does because he is a ownage poem/story writer :)
Quote from: Pk0wnedall on March 11, 2010, 03:13:15 AM
Quote from: caponer on March 11, 2010, 03:04:35 AM
He did his thang again ::)
Nice poem travis :)
He always does because he is a ownage poem/story writer :)
I agree with that. ;)
Haha thanks guys. I consider this one a 'classic'. Because it's an old-ish one I found on an obscure page in my poetry notebook. xD
Quote from: Volcanic Me on March 11, 2010, 06:45:17 AM
Haha thanks guys. I consider this one a 'classic'. Because it's an old-ish one I found on an obscure page in my poetry notebook. xD
Nice, Is all of this stuff happening in real life? That's what "Mooshu" said.
Yeah... that's where I get my inspiration. I take real-life events that I have a hard time dealing with and turn them into stuff like this. My poetry is forged from my pain. But I'm pretty happy right now. This one is just old.
Yupz, that's why i love your poetry Travis. <333
nice poem travis. :)
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nice poem travis. :)
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your welcome. ;)
He always does hectic poems :)
Hectic? >_> Please explain... xD
Quote from: Volcanic Me on March 19, 2010, 03:07:24 PM
Hectic? >_> Please explain... xD
Hectic, mean like they are really mad poems, they are also exciting and awesome.