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Off Topic => General (OT) => Topic started by: HotMax123 on October 06, 2009, 07:21:35 PM

Title: woke up and blew up! - the fallen (My band)
Post by: HotMax123 on October 06, 2009, 07:21:35 PM
one day I woke up and I did'nt care!!!!! later that day i fell down the stairs! YEAH!!!
(guitar dumms ect.)
blew up a car and shot it in air! I ain't gonna give you no crap,  cuz I dont care!!!

  one day I woke up and I Got so mad! I don't friken give a crap just don't wear plaid!
YEAH!!!! 

If you die now i will break you, My soul's twisted, I inlisted!!   



One day later I was broken, batllefields lay red!


the men we lost, god made them strong
it's just some of their lives just we'rent that long!


2 days later I woke up that morning ................................ BAAAAAAAMBHCHHHAW SHTTTTTSTSstststshstst ahhhhhhh! " I'm hit!!!"                            AOUWWWWWWWW!!! ahhh! I was blown to bits !
Title: Re: woke up and blew up! - the fallen (My band)
Post by: BigDogg420 on October 06, 2009, 09:13:06 PM
Max that's an ok song it's not bad but it could use some work it's still good. But next time can you put it in songs and lyrics this is not the right section for this but yea keep it up. 
Title: Re: woke up and blew up! - the fallen (My band)
Post by: HotMax123 on October 07, 2009, 09:09:05 AM
oops yeah your right sorry guys