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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: Thrive on June 06, 2009, 10:00:18 AM

Title: My Villanelle
Post by: Thrive on June 06, 2009, 10:00:18 AM
A Rose
Your swirl of petals makes me smile with glee,
A Rose is what you are, and nothing can change you,
You show yourself to everyone and me.

No matter white, red, pink, or all three,
You smell the best when your new,
Your swirl of petals makes me smile with glee.

   You grow in a bunch near my tree,
You make my house a spectacular view,
You show yourself to everyone and me.

You smell as fresh as tea,
You awaken to the morning dew,
And your swirl of petals makes me smile with glee

   You answer my plea,
As I watched, you grew,
Happily showing yourself to everyone and me.

My last words to you are: you’re free,
Free to show your hue,
With your swirl of petals that makes me smile with glee,
By showing yourself to everyone and me.
Title: Re: My Villanelle
Post by: Barrage Pked on June 06, 2009, 10:50:55 AM
This is very good, good job Thrive. :D
Title: Re: My Villanelle
Post by: Thrive on June 06, 2009, 12:29:16 PM
tyz
Title: Re: My Villanelle
Post by: Zack on June 06, 2009, 05:27:35 PM
Like it  ;D
Title: Re: My Villanelle
Post by: Volcanic Me on June 06, 2009, 06:35:37 PM
Wow, nice.
Title: Re: My Villanelle
Post by: serguy3 on June 06, 2009, 10:07:56 PM
L33T! I love it! MAKE MORE@!!!!



           ~Serguys_Pure.