Aberration (Formerly known as Dewmah)

[Volcanic Me]

The sea turned red,                                               
A storm brews on the horizon.                                                                         Dark
                                                                             
The toss and turn of the waves,
Showers thee with malicious glee.

The boiling,
Oh the boiling,
How it wishes to break free.

The boiling,
Oh the boiling,
It cannot be quelled.

A flash of lightning,
A gust of wind,
The sea claims another,
As if by a whim.

Whisked away,
By the sea of red,
Spouting obscenities,
To one's own dread.

A foul wind blows,
Lightning streaks the night's sky.

The wind pushes,
The wind pulls,
Thunder booms,
But lightning doesn't show.

A ship sails the sea of red,
A ship with the potential to grow a hundredfold.

The ship feels the soothing breeze that the caring wind provides.

The ships battles the force of the equally harsh wind.

Calamity!
Misfortune!
The ship has capsized!

Wind is to blame,
Thunder booms,
Lightning is on its way.

The ship recovers,
Not completely whole,
The ship now has some holes.

The sea of red boils,
A storm is on its way.

The wind picks up,
The ships is in peril of sinking.

The wind rips,
The wind tears,
Thunder booms,
Issuing one final warning,
Lightning is near.

Rain falls,
Waves roll in,
The storm is here.

Wind strikes,
The ship's sail rips,
Thunder booms,
Lightning shows it furious visage.

Lightning lashes out,
The decides to wait it out,
Thunder booms,
Lightning has been mentally and emotionally wounded.

Angry,
Pushed to the edge,
Lightning attacks the ship.

In pain,
Over its break point,
Lightning sets the ship ablaze.

The wind feeds the flames,
Pushing,
Pulling,
Hoping the ship will tip.

And still the rain falls,
The ship has met the sea's maw.

The wind tears off the mast,
Lightning hits the ship with a final heartbroken blast.

And thunder booms,
Penitence looms,
As the ship meets its doom.

The sea of red has been fed.

Lightning recedes,
Appalled by its deeds,
This is not how it was meant to be.

The uncaring wind still blows.

Thunder booms once more,
And one pain-saturated phrase is audible,
"Why did you do this to me?"...

Beside the sea of red looms a cliff,                                                               Transition
The cliff is barren,
But not overly so.

Life blooms on the cliff,
Yet it can be devoid of emotion.

The color changes again,
A new wind begins to blow...

A seed has been sown,                                                                                 Light
It's time for a flower to grow.

After days,
After weeks,
The little seed has grown.

Fully bloomed,
Its departure looms.

A beautiful flower,
Perched on the cliff it calls its own,
A gentle wind begins to blow.

The flower,
The radiant flower,
Is plucked from its perch.

The flower,
The radiant flower,
Is not going to be besmirched.

Above the sea,
The flower floats,
Fueled by mutual attraction.

Burdened with doubt,
The flower will fall.

Bolstered with hope,
The flower will recover.

Lifted by the winds of affection,
The flower floats above the sea,
The multi-colored sea that is life.

With one last gust of wind,
The flower is left to glide by its own means.

The question is,
Will love bloom?

Or will doubt force the flower to succumb?
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This poem was written about two people I care deeply for. One is lost; I hope the other makes it through.

[Exorcist]

This was a sad one. : (

I do like it still though, keep making them, Volcanic Me!

[Mooshu]

Oooo, you posted it! yay. It's perfect dude seriously.5\5 stars! <3

[Drunk Mario]

 10000000000000/5! dude i love this one! i think this one will stand above the others and reach out to others whom have troubles in their life! it's sad, but is very pleasant! pretty long too.. Gotta give you some props for having it long and well thought over! ;D

[Pk0wnedall]

Dude this is awesome!

100/100

[thursday9000]

:0 holy........

[Mooshu]

well..i was being a pro with the 5\5..but since you guys wanna one up me, i'll give it an error, because there's no limit to how good this is. it's just that awesome. go travz!

[Pk0wnedall]

well..i was being a pro with the 5\5..but since you guys wanna one up me, i'll give it an error, because there's no limit to how good this is. it's just that awesome. go travz!

Lol, "Error" Yup this is right this is the best poem in the world. Rock on travis!

[Volcanic Me]

well..i was being a pro with the 5\5..but since you guys wanna one up me, i'll give it an error, because there's no limit to how good this is. it's just that awesome. go travz!

Lol, "Error" Yup this is right this is the best poem in the world. Rock on travis!

I doubt that.

[Joker]

wow...travis nice poem...you really rock lol.. :o