kick butt poem i wrote

[netmaster296]

The world is ending
its the second time around
all the people are rending
each other to the ground
The Mayans have betrayed us
and now we have lost
all of the brethren
that once loved us
Beginning anew without our fear
will be such a defined new clear
and so the world will never die, we put fire in our sky

[Delicious]

Not bad, not bad at all.

[Drunk Mario]

nice poem!!!!!! keep up the good work! it's nice to see alot of people are tryign new things and being successful at it :D

[hill stead]

nice work dude

[kxdk]

Nice poem you should practice more, you could be an author for poems.
People make quite a bit of money doing those kinds of things.