You

[Volcanic Me]

I'm falling down,
There's no sound,
Your voice makes me hit the ground.

Things will be great,
When you're not so irate,
I'm willing to wait.

I don't know what I'm striving for,
I don't know why I haven't said it before,
I just know that you're worth waiting for.

Falling down,
No sound,
Hit the ground.

There's no sign,
I have no need to whine,
Just give me a sign,
And things will be divine.

I don't know if my efforts are wasted,
But all I know is this,
You're worth waiting for.

[Magnacore]

This poem seems to be about a girl that's not entirely ready to be in a relationship; but you're not going to give up. You seem to have dedication. From deciphering your poetry it seems that you're in a rough spot. Many blessings, you seem to be a good bloke.

[regents fury]

Nice one brah! You got some real talent!

[Purity]

nice song/poem bro

[regents fury]

I'mma bump this one brah, it sucks to see your talent go to waste.

[Banjo Hick]

I know, he had a good one on his forums but I'm not allowed to post it for him and he doesn't have an account on here anymore...

[mafia137]

Woah,effective, Did you write this yourself???

[Joker]

he's banned so he can't reply any mod forums lock this please.

[Bri]

You CANNOT request a lock on another person's topic.

[regents fury]

Especially on ones as good as these.

[Volcanic Me]

Thanks for the feedback everyone, and thanks for keeping my poems alive, Tj! I owe you tons for that. :D

[Prehistoric]

Dude i can see this it works...it fits..

[Volcanic Me]

Haha, thanks I guess. I wrote this to give to someone I know, and she gave it back. <_< So yeah. xD

[Prehistoric]

Sorry that sucks.. honestly some parts make it sound like the person really hurt you..

[ini432]

ya i like the sonG! man its awsome!