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Started by Diablo637, June 20, 2008, 06:41:53 AM

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How well written is this poem? (1-10)

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Diablo637

 

Since the beginning of time

Every thought

Every action



Our goals

Our wants

It?s all been overlooked!



Even if it means we change ourselves

We try our best

If only to impress those who judge us,



But in all likenesses

Thos ewho judge us

Only wish to be

Like us...


Yet another poem written for school.
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Diablo637

" I need a moderator to lock this topic...please. "
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Volcanic Me

Wow, great work, I'd hate for it to be locked, it truly was good. Honestly!