Love and Pain

[Thrive]

Love And Pain
Under you I look toward the bright stars.
As they make your face glow with luminance.
We sit together watching them afar.
Making ourselves a tiny audience.
Though I see it in your eyes that you seem
Not as happy as you are normally.
Pain and Sorrow create horrific screams
That are masked by love naturally.
There is no cure to such pain and sorrow.
Love may subdue its effects of misery.
Those who are unloved are forced to burrow
Themselves ‘til someone comes and makes them cheery.
   But with you next to me, misery fades
   And you become my only cure that aids.

[Barrage Pked]

You write very well. Nicely done.

[serguy3]

DANG.... Nice.... Lol. xD.... Hey barrage! That's basically like mine, not rhyming? You aren't saying "IT NEEDS TO RHYME, IT'S NOT A POEM." To him? =P

       ~Serguys_Pure.

[Thrive]

rofl

[Zack]

Short posts in which contain "lol" "ya" etc.. this will not be tolerated by anyone

Read the rules man, I don't want to see you get banned  :(

http://www.worldscapeblitz.com/blitz/smf/index.php/topic,3.0.html

[Barrage Pked]

DANG.... Nice.... Lol. xD.... Hey barrage! That's basically like mine, not rhyming? You aren't saying "IT NEEDS TO RHYME, IT'S NOT A POEM." To him? =P

       ~Serguys_Pure.

Most of it rhymes...